Okay, this is cool. Just be careful that while you're overdosing on each other that both of you remember to put first the One who can bring you out of that coma once you do overdose.
Don't get me wrong...I dig the piece, but most times when I listen, I'm also gauging an opportunity to encourage. I don't know you from Eve, but if this piece is any indication, you are really diggin' on your man. There's nothing wrong with that but overdosing on anything has a negative connotation whether that's what is intended or not.
However, again, I dig the piece. I just wish I didn't feel like you were both going to die in the end because you became each other's primary focus. LOL. It's cool, sistah. Be encouraged. You do have skills. That much is for sure.
First and foremost Overdose was a very good piece. Second, I don't know this Straight No Chaser thinks this channel is, however I have run across her many, many rude comments. Third People are looking for CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIQUES" that will hopefully help them when needed. What you pretend to do is obscene at best, this is judging NOT YOUR PERSONAL SCORE BOARD...and as an honor bound Judge, I personally take offense at your sniping at artists, let me see something of yours here that we can all judge, then we will talk. Sorry Fierce, your piece was far superior to a fraudulent critic with zero credentials. So please keep writing and bringing us your poetry and stories. Best to you, Kat
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by Fierce
Don't get me wrong...I dig the piece, but most times when I listen, I'm also gauging an opportunity to encourage. I don't know you from Eve, but if this piece is any indication, you are really diggin' on your man. There's nothing wrong with that but overdosing on anything has a negative connotation whether that's what is intended or not.
However, again, I dig the piece. I just wish I didn't feel like you were both going to die in the end because you became each other's primary focus. LOL. It's cool, sistah. Be encouraged. You do have skills. That much is for sure.
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