Great musicianship! Everybody played perfectly.
Excellent mix - plenty of bass and treble. Sounds very very good.
Vocals are not horrible, not great. If you continue making music and plan on doing it professionally, get a vocal coach.
I'm still blown away by the mix. Tell us how you recorded it: mics, mixer, digital audio device, PC or Mac, software you used etc.

This is a great song! You actually have a great voice you just need to practice staying on key. Listen to yourself and make sure you can hear yourself while recording. I faved it I think it's great!

Not the best production or vocals [not to discourage you]
but the song is well written and put together...you might look into pushing it to other bands to record.
I actually liked the song itself.
russ