Nice track, and I like what both Sandy and you did on this, but I have some suggestions. 1.Why wait till the song is almost over to feature Sandy? 2.Make the first part of her entrance near the end of the song, a vocal hook, and put it in 2 or 3 times in the song to break up the rap part, and give the song a commercial chorus hook. That will make this track much more commercial, and radio friendly. Just some suggestions, and my opinion. Nice track, but it could be even better. As always, I like your message. Good luck with it.
Comments for My life part 2 True story
by GHOST BLACK
1.Why wait till the song is almost over to feature Sandy?
2.Make the first part of her entrance near the end of the song, a vocal hook, and put it in 2 or 3 times in the song to break up the rap part, and give the song a commercial chorus hook. That will make this track much more commercial, and radio friendly.
Just some suggestions, and my opinion.
Nice track, but it could be even better.
As always, I like your message.
Good luck with it.
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DICARLO
No awards, no top 50, just great songs. thats what matters.