Hey love the music.. I think your great... Your voices seems that it be perfect for this chic i know from this lyricist website... She has many songs written (lyrics only) .. I think ya should check her out maybe it can be another hit song for check out some of her lyrics see if anything jumps out at ya to do.. Now i know she post them often but not sure whatas all on there as she is always collabrating with peeps on her lyrics...
Now she only is a lyricist so what ya see is just lyrics. However the song Homegirl thats been in the top 20 in R&b sung and posted by Gerald Thomas is one she had written as well...She has a few posted herself on ourstage but in country and etc... she writes all genres i think this is her website i tried it and it worked for me so www.freewebs.com/stephanieankner and her music page collabrations are on www.jamwave.com/stephanieankner
Peace & Luv
Best of luck....

although i didn't finish your song, from what i did hear, it was beautiful. i lost my mom too on july 3rd 2004. i just want to say, keep your head to the sky and keep on doing what your doing. you'll be discovered real soon, if you're not discovered already. peace! keisha