Yikes- everything about this track needs work. I've made myself suffer through it several times just to see if I can find anything redeeming, but there is just nothing here.

Plus- your photoshop skills don't do anything to add to your credibility.

F. For a completely amateurish effort- you don't even have the maturity in this genre to know how much more work needs to go into this to make it competition-ready.