Like light, life will end to glow Oh dear mother, where did my childhood go It just seems to me there is no harmony I’m getting older, is it all over, forever
Time it’s behind can’t be found in my mind Please let me believe there is relief for me.
Like dreams the future will awake Passing present, no matter which road I take Such stress compress my air to fully breath Will we ever get together another
Time it’s behind can’t be found in my mind Please let me believe there is relief for me.
Very good song! Solid instrumentation, solid songwriting, solid vocals. I wish the vocals were a tad bit more forward in the mix, you have a great singer there, no need to hide him in the music. The ending is great, I wish with that one vocal line was more forward than the others. Overall, I'm glad I listened to the whole song. Very good. I felt that the minute long intro was a little much. For the purposes of Ourstage, you will probably want to shorten it considerably, people expect the vocals to start right away or shortly into 15 seconds. I'd say 30 seconds for this genre. Otherwise great song, well done!
Comments for Relief
by Lynn
Oh dear mother, where did my childhood go
It just seems to me there is no harmony
I’m getting older, is it all over, forever
Time it’s behind
can’t be found in my mind
Please let me believe
there is relief for me.
Like dreams the future will awake
Passing present, no matter which road I take
Such stress compress my air to fully breath
Will we ever get together another
Time it’s behind can’t be
found in my mind
Please let me believe
there is relief for me.
lynn.se
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myspace.com/lynnsweden
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