Your rappin is nice Fam. Don´t care too much for the girl´s vocals. Should tune em up with Autotune.
But this track is in the WRONG channel.
Should be in Hip Hop/Rap, anyway.
Good luck.

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DICARLO

i think j said best "do these fools listen to music or do they just skim through it" keep doing ya thing fam shake the hatters off

Garbage, just like everything else out there. He talks about not being in for the money but thats the first things he's singing about. Scrap this and try to be original.