I like the song. I would consider re-eq'ing the vocals. they sound a bit canny. You might have over notched the 1-2khz. Consider running the vocals through small percentage an aural enhancer or, maybe, an acoustic guitar simulator. The latter is a crazy hunch, but its worth seeing what would happen. Abit of short, dense plate reverb can help add to the presence and even out the tone. However, take my advice with a grain of salt. I cant really say vocal recording is my forte