Let me first say that I'm no music guru. Given that, as just a layman, this doesn't sound good at all. The mic sounds muffled and in all honesty, the person singing occasionally sounds like he/she has something stuck in the back of the throat.

I can tell this would be a very good song if you re-recorded it with better sound quality. It's missing something though. I can't put my entire finger on what that something is, but it is missing something.

Keep pressing though. The upside here is that you already have a good song. You just need to polish it.

Blessings...
FaithsTempo