Wow this was incredible my young brotha! Please keep writing and reciting incredible truth telling jewels from the heart! And thank you for adding my piece (Wealth) as a favorite as well! I can already see you will be blessed to achieve great things.

Peace,
Wisdom Supreme
Supreme Entertainment

This touched my soul, thanks for sharing. Such a powerful message for a child. Excellent honey.

nice sounds i pick this as one of my favorites, now come check me out and see why i got everybody putting they guns on the table im in the hip-hop competition!!!!

Ya'll... I ain't got nothin' to gain by sayin' this but it's hard not to watch this video and visualize the effects of this piece on the hearts of many fathers (those doing what they can and those falling short) if something like this were played on the air waves. Still a worthy piece to hear and a great video to watch...touching.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7UaPuq0EZM

Watch Lil Dude's Video of "I forgive You Dad"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7UaPuq0EZM

This is such a heartfelt piece. Love the lesson of forgiving. Your insight and acceptance is so mature. Thanks for sharing this enlightment that so many of our children need and coming from another child makes it more acceptable... "Each one teach one...even Babes"
Much love Lil Dude.

HEARTFELT and EMOTION STIRRING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Without a doubt, this has to be the MOST HEARTFELT and EMOTION STIRRING poem in the Top 20. This poem makes me almost want to cry.
And if you can do that now at your age, you´re going to be MAJOR in the years to come.
Good luck Lil Dude. YOU GOT THE GIFT!!!! USE IT WELL!!!

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DICARLO

This was one of the greatest poems I've ever heard. Oh man that truly touched me. I grew up with my dad and now as my daughter who I love tremendously is 14 and getting older, it has always been a struggle to maintain a relationship with her because of the friction between me and her mother. But I go through it because I love my daughter. And this poem is a reminder of what we as fathers do to our children when we don't show them how much we care. It's not always about the money. They need us to be there.

I also grew up without my Father who is now in my life attempting to raise a grown woman. However, I couldn't find peace within myself until I forgave him for not being there. I had to realize that everyone has their own agenda and sometimes as hard as it is to swallow, they may hurt us more than help us by not being there. If that makes any sense at all...

Overall, my son, this piece needs to be heard by so, so, so many of OUR youth and the passion in your voice makes it heartfelt and real. Young man, please continue to seek freedom in your pen and be an incredible inspiration not only to your family and friends but to your fellow scribes as well. Can't WAIT to hear more from you.

Peace, prosperity and eternal blessings Lil Dude.
~QU

In the breath of mentioning transformation and change, able hearts are most effectively touched by the words of a child. Young man, I'm looking forward to being one of your fans and watching you grow as you pursue your endeavors. Hold onto this attitude of forgiveness and growth in wisdom. Too many of us have sacrificed it as we lost focus along the way. From the heart of youth, you have reached the hearts of many men. Keep reaching. Never stop. - A.R.