Above all the technical comments I can give you and pats on the back for being the best visually shot and colored short film, the main concerns as far as this short lie in the characters: slightly boring, acting: somewhat cheesy, and the editing: somewhat choppy. The style of editing you have gone with makes the film follow a certain rythmn or pacing. Once the characters are introduced to the audience, it's like someone put a cricket in your pance when you were editing. Lots of jittery cutting and it breaks a continuity of ideas and info that the audience is trying to listen and gather. Watch the acting. You can have an Imax feature look great that's for sure, but this film has more of a docu-style, ratehr than a fictious style and I think you're trying to blend the two somewhat, and it is very evident in the cinematography. The color is ok, but for outdoors it isn't hard to hide that. Over-all one of the best in the top 10, but again...It's just sad that Wheels won't win, due to the crap that makes it in this category, stuff that shouldn't even be on here, then taking a place and a ranking that makes it harder for the quality guys like you and me to actually win cash on this thing. Someone shoots a rock falling, then they upload it and call it a short film, and they then get all the World of Warcraft nerds on computers to vote up their shorts, and crap wins on this site and the $5K goes to the nerds!

why is this not in the *comedy* section? or is that part of the humour? LOL, seriously, even if you didn't intend to entertain me in the way i was entertained... Thanks

Nice!