How can a person with the name davidlynching1982 be taken serious for any sort of "critiques" on an original project such as this? Is the film a "MASTERPIECE!" No, not by any stretch of the imagination. Is it a masterpiece on this site when compared to most of the crap on it? Yes

and to just reiterate my less personal critisisms:
... as has been so generously allowed to me.

A few fancy camera tricks and music to match does not make a film deep… and in this case it only serves to make it pretentious. Luckily, most people are too stupid to realize this, and therefore you have truly created a MASTERPIECE!

*cough*perpleg*cough* <- who got served now biatch!

ok I know I promised not to make any more personal attacks... but this one is just to "purpleg"

so purpleg-
considering you just made a reference to "you got served" it makes sense that you liked this film.

kisses!

AMAZING! This film deserves first place and nothing less!!!! Seriously though, if at the end of the month this film is not first, it just goes to show how jealous people get... enough to rate it down just because it's so good.

I can't wait to see it in other film festivals!!!!
I will definitely be seeing you people on February 29th 8D

I loved the film...can't wait to see more of your work..

An amazing film! I loved it!

Wow, Mr. Davidlynching1982, it would appear that you just got served. Go Jesse! It just shocks me that people would take time out of their days to make negative personal attacks on a student film site.

I loved the film, and think that every aspect of it was excellent.

I deleted the comment because you were making personal attacks on the people involved in the film. Save that for myspace, please.

CENSORSHIP!

That's reeeeally big of you. You can't even handle a proper criticism... so you delete my comment.

How will you ever stomache the real critics?!

Unbelievably amazing work! This is so far above and beyond any

all my friends they just love the Short Film

wish you all the best Jesse