clearly you have talent, but this song goes so many directions you may lose your listeners. Maybe greater success by showcasing your wide range of abilities in different songs?
Love the phrigian mode attitude of it...IMHO it'd sound even better with a guitar solo at the end and some more heavy guitars but hey im a metal head xD
Your voice is really nice with quite a rock edge to it. It really suits the style you are aiming for. Again like others, I'm not too sure about the rapping but it still does work ok. I like the spoken part at the end of the song...nice. Overall all I really love this song!!
Comments for Temporary Insanity
by Krista
keep it up.
kudos.
Maggie
I like the spoken part at the end of the song...nice.
Overall all I really love this song!!