Very good, guys. Especially compared to the competition. A bit reminiscent of "Cloverfield," though there are a lot of creative ideas in this to (kind of) hold it up on its own. There are some charismatic scenes and good acting/realism (for a long time, I wasn't sure if the actors were ACTING, or actually MAKING a movie). If there is one thing I would like to have seen enhanced it would be the character development. I wish there was something else going on between your characters besides the filmmaking, like developed stories or jokes between them so we can get a better idea of their relationship (it can be done in 5 minutes!).

Anyway, I see this one making it's way much closer to the front of the rankings. Great job!

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