Cool music, Love your singing. I have been hooked for 42 years, I can't seem to get the monkey off my back. Love your song.
-Ron

Ouch! Too many dangerously out-of-tune vocal notes.
And I can't make myself believe it is desired effect. It is covered a bit by out-of-tune sax - this one clearly desired - but does it help the song?
So - I am not "lovin' this" - so sorry to say. Needs work.

Lovin this...do your thang then sis.

Very Cool!

Lovin' it...