Really great lyrics and vocals David, and I too look forward to the end version, guitars a little strong with my headphones, hee hee.

Hey David, this has the makings of a great song. The basic song is really good. I hear keyboards also, but I'm thinking more subdued organ fills. A Fiddle counter lead, against the tremelo guitar, would work alos. As long as it doesn't get too busy and you lose the excellent vocal you put down. I'm looking forward to the mastered mix. Blessings, John Latch

Hi David,I hear with this (Good) song a piano (with a sub melody)and backing vocals as a carpet

Excellent lyrics...I want to hear it when your done.

Nice song David, I love the message....lookin forward to hearing the mastered version

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MAN YOU KNOW HOW TO MAKE MUSIC ! THIS IS AWESOME SONG!LOVE IT.

Beautiful David I love it !!!!and Don's right !!I can't wait to hear it produced Really loving that guitar too
Great song and Beautiful Lyrics
Hugs to ya..xoxo

Nice super song and nice job on the vocals keep it up Im looking forward to hearing more

You are fantastic. What a beautiful song "A Fathers love". Listen, you do not need a pro mix to tell a great songwriter and artist. You are one! Wish I had the chance to write with you. You have been blessed with a wonderful talent to put meaningful things to music.
All the best to you1 Stay in touch. Hope you can visit my site and see if you can gain anything from my music. Love to have you there. So come, sit down for a while and take in the music. Thanks again, best of luck to you. Love that song!
Your friend and fellow artist/songwriter, DebbieZ

Nice song!