really bold to compare yourself to rakim. that's ballsy. but i'm on the fence with this one. it sounds like something i've heard before but, on the other hand, it's strangely unique.

there is strength in your voice....passion is very evident......enjoyed the piece.

Poets are better off not comparing themselve to none other than themselves...who do I sound like? ummm....that dude I listen to!

People have minds so let them think and you do the same. Keep preaching it you have my vote.

I like your passion in your voice. I just wish the recording was a little better. And I will agree with Queen. Be careful about comparing yourself to legends. Because your fans will judge you according to that.

But you did your thang sister.

Peace,

Anointed Poet

Okay, what my very honest Poetic-brothas might mean is that you may have tried a lil too hard and were a lil too quick to compare ya'self to the likes of a legend like Rakim. Allow your audience to be the judge of that. B

ut on a lighter note, I can hear that determination and passion in ya voice sis and its intoxicating! Keep doin you!

Rakim?????????????????? Hell Nooooo...

Rakim?????????????????? Nooooo...