I DEFINITELY LIKE YOUR FREE-STYLE; BUT WHEN YOUR UP FOR A COMPETITION SUCH AS THIS ONE, YOU HAVE TO ADD STRUCTURE TO YOUR SONGS. NEVERTHELESS, YOUR HOOKS ARE WEAK; AS WELL AS ALOT OF THINGS ABOUT THIS SONG: AND THESE ARE THE BAD HABITS THAT FREE-STYLERS FALL INTO. THEREFORE, FROM THE REAL TO THE REAL- START WRITING SONGS; BECAUSE IT MAY BE ABOUT WHO YOU KNOW THAT WILL GET YOU IN THE GAME; BUT IT'S ABOUT WHAT YOU KNOW THAT WILL KEEP YOU THERE. IT'S ONLY POSITIVE CRITICISM. AND TRUST ME, WORDS FROM THE WISE IS OFFICIAL.