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Propane

by Money Boi Da Kidd

Def Poetry
Uploaded: December 30, 2008
Duration: 1m 47s

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by Money Boi Da Kidd

 
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Portrait of FaithsTempo
I think this is definitely spoken word. I have to say though, that there are a lot of other ways to express one's self. That beat is just whoa. We have to be careful when we use certain profane words and we have to understand the intent. Even cuss (or curse) words need purpore if we purpose ourselves to use them. Here, they sound like filler for a lack of formidable thought.

I honestly think you should consider rethinking this...just rewriting it almost altogether. Add some depth. I saw a previous person said something about the music being so tight that it's a shame it's not backing something more deep (more or less). I have to concur.

You can obviously do something...so do it. Represent. Use your powers for good. LOL. I hope you know what I mean. I wish you well in future endeavors. Hit us with some depth and if you insist on cussin', use it with purpose. Please? ;-)

Blessings...
FaithsTempo
Portrait of angeloverload_host
Dred sista and I agree.. put it into the rap category this could easily fit there ... great piece.
Portrait of Dred Sista Ren
You are definitely swaggadocious. i 'd suggest throwing into the rap ring as well
Portrait of Kodakk
Wow this kids kinda nice. This is something very Unique and i believe that it deserves a higher ranking.
Portrait of WordSound Radio
the music is captivating...
i really wish this track was a bit more thought provoking, lyrically. we have to be responsible artists over a track this hot. it's almost a pity.
 
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