I think this is definitely spoken word. I have to say though, that there are a lot of other ways to express one's self. That beat is just whoa. We have to be careful when we use certain profane words and we have to understand the intent. Even cuss (or curse) words need purpore if we purpose ourselves to use them. Here, they sound like filler for a lack of formidable thought.
I honestly think you should consider rethinking this...just rewriting it almost altogether. Add some depth. I saw a previous person said something about the music being so tight that it's a shame it's not backing something more deep (more or less). I have to concur.
You can obviously do something...so do it. Represent. Use your powers for good. LOL. I hope you know what I mean. I wish you well in future endeavors. Hit us with some depth and if you insist on cussin', use it with purpose. Please? ;-)
the music is captivating... i really wish this track was a bit more thought provoking, lyrically. we have to be responsible artists over a track this hot. it's almost a pity.
Comments for Propane
by Money Boi Da Kidd
I honestly think you should consider rethinking this...just rewriting it almost altogether. Add some depth. I saw a previous person said something about the music being so tight that it's a shame it's not backing something more deep (more or less). I have to concur.
You can obviously do something...so do it. Represent. Use your powers for good. LOL. I hope you know what I mean. I wish you well in future endeavors. Hit us with some depth and if you insist on cussin', use it with purpose. Please? ;-)
Blessings...
FaithsTempo
i really wish this track was a bit more thought provoking, lyrically. we have to be responsible artists over a track this hot. it's almost a pity.