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Hey Girl

by HK914

My Swag
Uploaded: May 17, 2009
Duration: 3m 29s

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by HK914

 
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Portrait of Oozing Greatness
Yo HK914!
Sorry it took so long to get back. I've been busy wit family business. I love the fiery flow on the verses. I'd personally bump up the tempo 10 bpm, and put more heat on the chorus. Blow that f'ker up dawg. You sound a little hesitant. If you rework the choruses I think you've got a contender here. The production is good. I'd go easy on the vocoder so you don't sound like 500 other M/F out there. Just real talk, and love brother. I dig your swag, and your voice is tight. Keep up the great work!

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