I like the two styles of vocal going on here although I'm biased toward the chorus which has what I'd term 'ahellofahook!' This format worked for Dido/Eminem, and this is no less of a song so listen up you suits out there, give these guys a break! Rap's not always my thing but this works and if I had a few grand to invest I know where it would be going... Great stuff!

Terry – A Zit From Acne

I disagree, I think she sings the hook as well as anyone could. Great rhythm, it sounds like Mike Shinoda has been an influence of yours.

Nice mix awesome lyrics, rapper will be a superstar, female vox let this track down very bad. Replace her with someone who can sing and you have a hit.

TG