Very catchy tune. This could be a hit today. I have to admit I'm not a big fan of pop music today, but you sang your ass off on this song, it had a great hook that kept me listening, and most of all I really enjoyed it. Killer job. Dude if I had the money to back you, first I would polish up your image, drop the "F" bomb from the song, PG up the lyrics and sell it all to Disney. With your looks and talent you could be the male answer to Hannah Montana. Might not be what you want right not, but 13 & 14 year old girls don't stay 13 & 14 forever. Think about it and give me a call, we can do this. Oh shit I forgot, I'm a broke soldier, sorry I got lost in the fantasy. Good Luck.

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