this right here is hot. im loving it burning down all my trees..nice work stay fly

AC

You've used my favorite color in the background
Insulted my passion for my first love by bringing it down
Calling this spoken word when it's actually rap
Selling it off as in this channel because most boys will want a tap
Because you dressed yourself in straps
As beautiful as you may or may not be to the eyes of those
Who "fiend" after the touch of a woman's skin beneath her clothes
I heard a few lines of poetry, but not enough
To make me respect you as an artist in love
With poetry and spoken word
Nude, you may be, but this piece does not deserve
To remain here amongst the works of other artists
Who have bled, sweat, and cried to make the list
Upon the hearts of listeners, watchers, and fans
Who have a deep admiration and respect for the craft...
The "GIFT" of poetry

Don't defile it. Recognize it. Respect it.

This isn't a dumping ground for "stuff" that won't make it in other channels. THIS channel is for poets who love the art so much, that many would be willing to make the kinds of sacrifices that few are willing to make for their own children. We love this channel "THAT" much. Poetry/Spoken Word is our baby.

This piece... doesn't have a father... It's a wanderer. Put some clothes on it and show it that you love it.

I'm usually not so brutal, but you hurt me deep with this presentation.

THIS IS NOT SPOKEN WORD and standing here half naked doesn't increase the probability that a real poet or a genre fan will favor this nice RAP piece.

FINALLY!!!!! A HARD FEMALE WHO CAN SPIT!!
KEEP DOIN YA THANG BOO

showin dis trak luv from DC. ya dig
checkout my hits n get back wit me

we should do a calab, ton of beats, house of beatz check us out ohio phony homies and raise up

This is a beautiful track which I have favourited. You have a terrific voice and even your vibrato is on the beat. The arrangement is very economical, very tasteful use of bass and piano. It's not usually my genre but good is good. It reminds me of my Jody Whately tape that someone stole many years ago.