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Shoestring Blues, by Zachary Burke on OurStage Play

Shoestring Blues

by Zachary Burke

Somewhere in our dream world we must take the time to make room for responsibilities and family. It's not resentment, but there is a sense of loss, isn't there?
Uploaded: August 19, 2009
Duration: 5m 29s

Comments for Shoestring Blues

by Zachary Burke

 
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Portrait of Bob & Deb
Well said, Don and great job, Zachary!!
DebHappy-dark
Portrait of Don Worden
Like the way the phrasing seems a little out of synch with the meter. This just emphasizes the inner conflict and eliminates any hint of self-pity. Introspection without the whining - what a concept.

Don
 
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