I kinda agree with King, but on the other hand, It also works soo well the way it is. I don't think that you need to change the beat totally. But wow, great track!

this is good, but i think the beat is too busy (breakbeat may be a bad choice)
this is a great song, just not good to be produced in this way. if you could make some more tracks or something to support the beats and the vocals...you know, balance, i think it'd be perfect.

otherwise great job!

Love the way it builds and evolves over time. The entrance of the stringish pad adds a new dimension of beauty.

Excited to hear your upcoming work, if this is just the start. Keep it comin', guys!

like this little piece of music. good work.