Thanks for the insight. This was the very first song i ever recorded at home all on my own i was still working out the kinks. The song is raw but still i like to reflect on it as it was a great first attempt for me!

The vocals are a bit far back in the mix, and lack impact. When this impression is reinforced by a picture of Josh hunched over the guitar, face hidden by his hat, well I just feel that there is not enough effort put into involving the listener.
It's a decent song, but needs a punchier arrangement.