Wow! I am seriously impressed! I laughed several times. My favorite scene was the one where the man offered let the guy tour his apartment and Ashley says, "Actually, we don't show apartments that are not on notice to vacate...sorry...and then you made that face...That was a priceless facial expression that fit the moment perfectly. I enjoyed watchinh it...and did so several times.
I give it a "thumbs up".

Brilliant shots and script. Grade: 100

Great job!!!