I have been playing the guitar since I was 14 years old and dabbled a bit with writing since. In the past couple of years I have gotten a little more serious about my writing and have made several friends who have helped me immensely along that road. I will probably never consider myself more than a hobbyist, but music is without a doubt a passion and there is no bigger thrill for me then knowing something I wrote or co-wrote has touched another person.
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Hey there
Well I got another new one posted. Not sure this is the final mix but I like it alot. The song is called “Revitalizing Rain”. I wrote it with Gary Denis a friend from Songramp.com. The recording process took place on Kompoz.com. I love that place. Have a listen and let me know what you think.
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Your Personality Split
Uploaded Jun 17, 2008
- 137th in Southern/Blues Rock/Rockabilly
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-Much love-
Helena & Maria
Thanks so much for the wishin us well. It will all go great I'm sure. And thanks for commenting on our new tune. We were excited to finally record it. Have a great week.
-April & Amy
That tracks gonna be on the new albumn coming out in the winter i guess, but thanks for checking it out
timmy
Revitalizing Rain is a pretty good tune...
if it were me and my song,... I would trim some unneccesary words out here and there so the phrasing is a little smoother...(ie: instead of saying SOME fresh air might do me good....(it sounds kind a squished in there)- eliminate SOME, and just start with the Fresh Air) and I would also either add some lower/deeper undertones in the lyrical melody, or do it in a lower key....
Just a couple of suggestions.... but, hey - it's your tune and it does sound good as it is -- but it could be even better with some tweaking....
Good luck to you!!
Have a great week!